Thursday, 10 March 2016

Script - Final Draft

This is our Final Draft of the Script for AFCROW

Establishing shot of city - residential area of London, titles over buildings, narrator says "Crime, everywhere, overtaking the law," (4-6s)

Cut to shot of superhero costume hanging on wardrobe door handle by coat hanger, narrator says " And few superheroes can hold down the fort," (4s) pull focus & tilt down (1s) to reveal table full of unpaid bills & urgent notices, narrator says "But it’s getting harder for ‘em," (3s)

Cut to close up, side on shot of hero, holding controller & playing video game, can be heard but not seen, light of screen on hero's face, narrator says "And, let’s be honest, this is Tooting, so they're hardly getting any better." (2-3s)

Cut to over shoulder shot of hero, video game screen on left 2/3, hero's head on right 1/3 (1-2s), crab right until hero's head on left 1/3, other screen showing news on right 2/3, during crab hero pauses game & turns attention to news showing crime live (crab for 2-4s).

Cut to close up of hero's face newsreader voice fades in saying "... a series of attacks near ____are taking place and we’re still waiting for a heroic response, the police have no leads (etc.)", (1-2s), projected light from TV seen on hero’s face?, hero realises he’s needed & smiles, puts down controller & jumps up & out of shot (3-5s), narrator says “Luckily that’s where I come in!”,

Cut to mid shot of superhero costume, hero runs into shot, grabs costume & runs out of shot, with title under the costume? (1-2s), narrator says “The assassin born from the darkness…”

Cut to CU/ECU of hero’s stomach, arms move up from bottom to reveal title, then come down from top pulling t-shirt with them to cover title (2-3s), narrator says “…with a blade like a crows talons…”

Cut to CU shot of hero’s upper arm, (possibly with face to show expression), brings in bandannas & holds against arm, different colours, every time bandanna removed reveals different title & covers when next comes in, rejects until gets to black, which hero then ties around arm (2-6s), narrator says “…and an ‘fro that eclipses the moon…”

Cut to close up shot of hero pulling on glove, pulls hand up/back in pulling on glove, hand straightens to reveal title, finger pokes through hole in glove, hand raises to cover title as hero fixes glove (3s), narrator says “…the man who’s a hero for fun…”

Cut to CU shot of hero’s waist, to side & pulling up trousers, stumbling backwards, exits frame to reveal door in background (2s), sound effect of crash (0.5-1s), hero runs back into frame, now LS/MLS, runs/stumbles out of door & out of shot (2s),


Cut to establishing shot (0.5 -2s), zoom out to reveal hero standing on roof, low angle of hero from behind (1-4s), hero runs back out of shot, narrator says “…AFCROW…” with movie title in the sky.

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