Script - Second Draft

This is the script that I rewrote using Aidan's first draft

Establishing shot of city - residential area of London, titles over buildings, narrator says "Crime, everywhere, overtaking the law," (4-6s)

Cut to shot of superhero costume hanging on wardrobe door handle by coat hanger, narrator says "Only a few superheroes can keep it down," (4s) pull focus & tilt down (1s) to reveal table full of unpaid bills & urgent notices, narrator says "But it’s getting harder for them," (3s)

Cut to close up, side on shot of hero, holding controller & playing video game, can be heard but not seen, light of screen on hero's face, narrator says "And, well, they're hardly getting better." (2-3s)

Cut to over shoulder shot of hero, video game screen on left 2/3, hero's head on right 1/3 (1-2s), crab right until hero's head on left 1/3, other screen showing news on right 2/3, during crab hero pauses game & turns attention to news showing crime live (crab for 2-4s), newsreader voice fades in saying "... series of attacks near ____, the police have no leads (etc.)", slow zoom in on news? (1-2s),

Cut to close up of hero's face, newsreader still heard, projected light from TV seen on hero’s face?, hero realises needed & seen on face, puts down controller & jumps up & out of shot (3-5s),

Cut to mid shot of superhero costume, hero runs into shot, grabs costume & runs out of shot, letters fly off table in front of camera? (1-2s),

Cut to CU/ECU of hero’s stomach, arms move up from bottom to reveal title, then come down from top pulling t-shirt with them to cover title (2-3s),

Cut to CU shot of hero’s upper arm, (possibly with face to show expression), brings in bandannas & holds against arm, different colours, every time bandanna removed reveals different title & covers when next comes in, rejects until gets to black, which hero then ties around arm (2-6s),

Cut to close up shot of hero pulling on glove, pulls hand up/back in pulling on glove, hand straightens to reveal title, finger pokes through hole in glove, hand raises to cover title as hero fixes glove (3s),

Cut to CU shot of hero’s waist, to side & pulling up trousers, stumbling backwards, exits frame to reveal door in background (2s), sound effect of crash (0.5-1s), hero runs back into frame, now LS/MLS, runs/stumbles out of door & out of shot (2s),

Cut to establishing shot (0.5 -2s), zoom out to reveal hero standing on roof, low angle of hero from behind (1-4s), hero runs back out of shot,

Notes

I have probably underestimated some times, but also don’t know what should go next, so feel free to give me some ideas

The shots of putting the costume on could be rearranged if needed

Feel free to add shots if you think of something